tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8380728033765212095.post1178871416346264494..comments2023-07-06T05:22:25.217-07:00Comments on visoundtextpoem: Air-vent gods breath.mike di tomassohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15593531523040167578noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8380728033765212095.post-68815195764511745832008-06-04T11:41:00.000-07:002008-06-04T11:41:00.000-07:00glad I could help,mate. I may make a recording of ...glad I could help,mate. I may make a recording of myself vocalising it and possibly manipulate it and make a text-sound compostion out of it, then publish it on this blog. actualy your poem resembles a sound poetry score. kind of reminds me of John m Bennet.mike di tomassohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15593531523040167578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8380728033765212095.post-79861943972150488712008-06-04T10:42:00.000-07:002008-06-04T10:42:00.000-07:00!!!lighght ubulb wowewntyr response was a lightbul...!!!<BR/><BR/>lighght ubulb wowewnt<BR/><BR/>yr response was a lightbulb moment for me in relation to soundpoetry & an effective conversion of written semantic material into something resembling a phonemic score which nearly vocalizes itself off the page in this readers reading.<BR/><BR/>it resembles many of the classic scores for soundpoetry that i've come across,<BR/><BR/>but the lightbulb was how you extracted & condensed the vowels -<BR/><BR/>i can't believe i've missed this aspect when considering soundpoetry, the technique has a wide range of possibility & configuration & combinitory dimensions.<BR/><BR/>i know it's perhaps selfdefeating to search for meaning in certain things and some things are meaningful precisely for their meaninglessness or resistance to meaning-<BR/><BR/>but the exercise you've carried out has helped add meaning to my percepts of soundpo & the range of dynamics involved -<BR/><BR/>so thanks for the lesson in soundsight!troylloydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14706450196335510065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8380728033765212095.post-34265128303246361112008-06-04T05:45:00.000-07:002008-06-04T05:45:00.000-07:00exellent. Here's a version without consenantts:ee ...exellent. Here's a version without consenantts:<BR/><BR/><BR/>ee ee ee<BR/>oa ii o o,<BR/>eei ee oa<BR/>oeeei 'o<BR/>ouee oy<BR/>ea' ayae<BR/>oee oui<BR/>aio ' oa eou,<BR/>ee ee ee.<BR/><BR/>oa ya u ee<BR/>ia ie<BR/>ai eeu<BR/>ooaa uu<BR/>aau o auau -<BR/><BR/>oo uie,<BR/>eyeo oa eyeie<BR/>ee ee ee<BR/>aee ae uy<BR/>ue uo iu iai.<BR/><BR/>ai<BR/>aye<BR/>ai<BR/>auauy<BR/>ia iee<BR/>yay ee io<BR/>aae aau 'eaa<BR/>eeii ii<BR/>oa eey' e<BR/>oe iii.<BR/><BR/>ee e<BR/>ee ee<BR/>'<BR/>eai e<BR/>eea eee,<BR/><BR/>oi' ie i<BR/>ee oo i<BR/>oa ii,<BR/><BR/>ae e a a<BR/>ee ee ee<BR/>'<BR/>o oea oa<BR/>eey ae<BR/>oooooy<BR/>eeae.mike di tomassohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15593531523040167578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8380728033765212095.post-51677346324524653742008-06-03T22:57:00.000-07:002008-06-03T22:57:00.000-07:00fleesh fleten fleeshflota finish to florr,freekwin...fleesh fleten fleesh<BR/>flota finish to florr,<BR/>freekwing fether forma<BR/>forefeeling 'mongst<BR/>flocculence softly<BR/>shear'd shaggymane<BR/>hoveren clouddrift<BR/>airglow 'n solar geolu,<BR/>fleesh fleten fleesh.<BR/><BR/>donka dyngja such smellen<BR/>witha inscent<BR/>frankin freepur<BR/>odorata murru<BR/>labdanum to laudanum -<BR/><BR/>florrbord grundgrinnen,<BR/>eyeshot onna eyeline<BR/>level tween level<BR/>apeer gazen muchly<BR/>musen uppo mirus mirari.<BR/><BR/>air<BR/>layer<BR/>air<BR/>ablurablurry<BR/>inna schimeren<BR/>byways bleden brightgold<BR/>aflake afallup 'neatha<BR/>freekwingish windswift<BR/>fromma fetherfly'd breth<BR/>godsped visripping.<BR/><BR/>these vents<BR/>bleed teeth<BR/>'nd<BR/>shearing sheds<BR/>needa shepherde,<BR/><BR/>showin' nicest lights<BR/>where notno blink<BR/>gonna missit,<BR/><BR/>gape the gap as<BR/>fleesh fleten fleesh<BR/>'nd<BR/>florr opena dorra<BR/>sheeply shapes<BR/>woolowooly<BR/>sheepwalker.troylloydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14706450196335510065noreply@blogger.com