tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8380728033765212095.post8748229833375723275..comments2023-07-06T05:22:25.217-07:00Comments on visoundtextpoem: Am I really saying anything?mike di tomassohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15593531523040167578noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8380728033765212095.post-52418354465770195692008-11-08T14:23:00.000-08:002008-11-08T14:23:00.000-08:00great poem, I first became aware of this particula...great poem, I first became aware of this particular poetic form through listening to Brion Gysin's text-sound compositions and reading his written permutation poems. interesting what you can do with very few words.mike di tomassohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15593531523040167578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8380728033765212095.post-62485652040302219352008-11-08T13:52:00.000-08:002008-11-08T13:52:00.000-08:00I was just reading a similar poem in William Burro...I was just reading a similar poem in William Burroughs' THE WESTERN LANDS (though Burroughs' poem is rather morbid):<BR/><BR/>Breathe in your death.<BR/>Death you're in. Breathe.<BR/>You're in. Breathe death.<BR/>In breath. You are death.Eccentric Scholarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14316310165037320995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8380728033765212095.post-27696187304039967442008-11-07T11:40:00.000-08:002008-11-07T11:40:00.000-08:00Sanonko todella jotakin? Olen todella sanomassa jo...Sanonko todella jotakin? Olen todella sanomassa jotakin? Jotakin sanomassa olenko todellakin? Todellakin olenko sanomassa mitään? Sano, olenko oikeasti mitään? Olenko jotakin todella, sano "olen".....You are very creative. =)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com