Am I really saying anything?
I am really saying anything?
Anything-saying, am I really?
Saying, really anything-am I?
Really, am I saying anything?
Say, am I really anything, ing?
Am anything really say “I am?”
Any really am say I am thing?
An y really am say I thinglly?
3 comments:
Sanonko todella jotakin? Olen todella sanomassa jotakin? Jotakin sanomassa olenko todellakin? Todellakin olenko sanomassa mitään? Sano, olenko oikeasti mitään? Olenko jotakin todella, sano "olen".....You are very creative. =)
I was just reading a similar poem in William Burroughs' THE WESTERN LANDS (though Burroughs' poem is rather morbid):
Breathe in your death.
Death you're in. Breathe.
You're in. Breathe death.
In breath. You are death.
great poem, I first became aware of this particular poetic form through listening to Brion Gysin's text-sound compositions and reading his written permutation poems. interesting what you can do with very few words.
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